A brave attempt, unfortunately you've got Radek to compete with.
Just a bit of advice, get your sequences in sync and if able, maybe quantize your playing in midi (?) before recording as audio. Your timing is out, particularly the background sequence and bass.
Drums, phased pad and high string sounds are good but your lead sounds are questionable.
Sorry if sounds harsh, your future tracks would be much better with these issues in mind.
Keep at it !
