You eitehr love or hate this kind of music. Everybody hates Confusion (Pump Panel Reconstruction Mix) because it is too repetitive, except for me. I like the concept with a develop all the way to the end repetitive track, but it sounds better when more notes are used as in confusion where the melody or the sequence consist of a full 16 step sequence instead og just a few repetitive notes.
I know it is your track and we have different opinions, but think some distortion to the drums would give it some extra power ot atleast a little more to the track so it sounds less empty. Reverb and delay are also good to make the sound wider, if you know what I mean.